Digital 2D art / Help please / immy 20 years ago

Help please

I know I don't post often for CC, and I offer it even less...but...
I cannot figure out how to fix this one and I need some fresh trained eyes to help me, if possible. This is supposed to be a chick..and it's turning out to be a drag queen looking thing.

Oy.

Is it her eyes? Are they too manly, even with those lashes? Too fake looking?
The nose is still being worked on, but could that be the cause of it?
Mouth?

/bangs her head against the screen til she sees pretty colors

Using Dia's suggestions: Edit 1:

Edit 2:

Finished (I think):

The sig:

immy 20 years ago

Lil update. Hopefully, I'll be able to finish this tonight or tomorrow.

Right now her right arm is a layer of its own since I'm not sure if I'm going to keep the pose or not. Still haven't decided what to do with her other arm. Suggestions are more than welcome on that one.
CC the fuck out of her hand please. Hands > Me.

immy 20 years ago

Whee!
Think I'm done!
CC 5 is, of course, welcome. =)

Finished version of character:

And the signature:

I can't thank you guys enough for the help, without ya, she would have had a drag queen looking sig. =)

ROzbeans 20 years ago

Oooh, her face is beautiful! On the portrait, only c/c I see is her hands, specifically the backs of them looks small in proportion to the rest of her body. If that makes sense. Like they should be longer to match her fingers.

In the sig, I'd change the opacity around: Do the color in 100 percent, then fade the back since it matches the background's tone. I think it'll look more vibrant that way, but that might be preference.

Beautiful, Immy! :thumbsup

immy 20 years ago

Ok, taking the close-up to 100%, I had to change the font color or move it around.
Does this look alright?

Font placement / effect / style > me.