Digital 3D art / Psst! / Temprah 20 years ago

Psst!

I'm not entirely sold on the fonts but after messing with them so long I need some fresh eyes. This is a splash page I want to throw up for my new website, so please pick the hell out of it, I want it to be perfect since it's a first impression.. and if the whole thing stinks, you can say it =)
Linking for size :
Version 1

Version 2

Credits :
V3 w/ Margot goth skin & second skin clothes, Damnation red eyes
Mane hair
Distant Worlds lights
Rendered in Daz Studio v1 & postwork in PS

Sabby 20 years ago

Ooh, I like her, she's sexah!

I'd definately post work the thigh crotch area as right now its got a collision happening. BUT I love the font you have there. Looking good!

ROzbeans 20 years ago

Only 2 things jump out at me. The poser looks especially hot, but her left hand is confusing me. I know her hand is up there trying to say, 'psst, hey!' but it needs to be closer to her mouth, I think.

I love that font, but then so does everyone. =x It's SO over used. Otherwise it's hot :thumbsup !

Adiene 20 years ago

shes a cutie! Ditto what Mae said ~

Temprah 20 years ago

Ok update.. Moved the hand around and tried to clean up the thighs. CHanged the font.. I know this one is way more common, everyone uses scriptina.. but I like it :) Which font looks better..? I also put some more red in her hair. How does this one look?

ROzbeans 20 years ago

Did you post the link somewhere or did you forget? /pinch

Temprah 20 years ago

*sigh* I forgot to add in the link... looks like I need a spanking! =p It's up there now!

Sabby 20 years ago

The thighs are looking much better!

I honeslty preferred the other font... even tho it is used frequently, it actually fit the style of the image which is edgy and sharp. The scriptina is too flowy and soft, IMO. Could just be personal preference, tho.