little things about the pose that bug me.. why is she holding up her own ass? put in the tips of her fingers like she's touching him maybe? and his hand.. maybe erase the tip of his thumb so it looks like his hand is going to hold her leg?
Also the chainmail on her chest seems VERY flat.. I think you should add some dodge / burn to give it more depth, and some shadows
Husband/Wife Magelo
Have been staring at this way - way - way too long... Crits please... I would ideally not like to go back in and re-pose / render, but will if I have too.
And btw... Heyas, its been a while since I posted! :)
Temprah
20 years ago
Julie
20 years ago
If its ok if I just scribble on it a bit. I have a suggestion.
Julie
20 years ago
If its ok if I just scribble on it a bit. I have a suggestion.
ROzbeans
20 years ago
Paintovers are allowed on TAC with permission of artist =)
/JUMPS ON JULIE
/JUMPS ON JULIE
ROzbeans
20 years ago
Paintovers are allowed on TAC with permission of artist =)
/JUMPS ON JULIE
/JUMPS ON JULIE
Sabby
20 years ago
scribble away
Sabby
20 years ago
scribble away
Julie
20 years ago
basically I've taken a quick layer of multiply at 60% (using blue from your pic) to put your toons into shadow more and backlight them a bit more. then I used a layer of 'hard light'(using the pink already present) set around 30% to touch a bit more of the color onto the edges.
it helps tone down the green pants a bit more and accentuate their expressions :) If you really feel like reposing that one hand supporting her tush could use some firm contact with it or be moved elsewhere.
it helps tone down the green pants a bit more and accentuate their expressions :) If you really feel like reposing that one hand supporting her tush could use some firm contact with it or be moved elsewhere.
Julie
20 years ago
basically I've taken a quick layer of multiply at 60% (using blue from your pic) to put your toons into shadow more and backlight them a bit more. then I used a layer of 'hard light'(using the pink already present) set around 30% to touch a bit more of the color onto the edges.
it helps tone down the green pants a bit more and accentuate their expressions :) If you really feel like reposing that one hand supporting her tush could use some firm contact with it or be moved elsewhere.
it helps tone down the green pants a bit more and accentuate their expressions :) If you really feel like reposing that one hand supporting her tush could use some firm contact with it or be moved elsewhere.
Vex
20 years ago
yep. she kinda looks like she's holdng something up/in.
for the repose, make his hand grab her leg ( like for real grab it. not just touch it )
her oddball hand could rest on his chest or nearly grabbing his waist or something. it helps to do your own pose in RL to feel what is most natural.
for the repose, make his hand grab her leg ( like for real grab it. not just touch it )
her oddball hand could rest on his chest or nearly grabbing his waist or something. it helps to do your own pose in RL to feel what is most natural.
Vex
20 years ago
yep. she kinda looks like she's holdng something up/in.
for the repose, make his hand grab her leg ( like for real grab it. not just touch it )
her oddball hand could rest on his chest or nearly grabbing his waist or something. it helps to do your own pose in RL to feel what is most natural.
for the repose, make his hand grab her leg ( like for real grab it. not just touch it )
her oddball hand could rest on his chest or nearly grabbing his waist or something. it helps to do your own pose in RL to feel what is most natural.
Sabby
20 years ago
Hehe, would need someone to hug up to... And well, my 7 yr old daughter.. I dont think she'll work...
Thanks for input... still working on it.
Thanks for input... still working on it.
ROzbeans
20 years ago
I think if you really don't want to repose, then using the lighting suggestions from Julie I think pretty much wraps up your piece. At least from what I can see.