tigra NSFW
c/c 4ish
just a bored peice lol
freebie snake from daz
jungle from daz
sonia from rosity
shoes from daz
hair by me
shiyla
19 years ago
snake tail looks funny to meh
Adiene
19 years ago
Very cool looking :)
umm CC ...
I think with all the grass you have in there and given the look of it, it apprease to be a bit long I'd throw a few over her foot there , not much a a few blades. and erase the blades of grass that are over the snake belly there. With the light a shadow from her would look great :)
umm CC ...
I think with all the grass you have in there and given the look of it, it apprease to be a bit long I'd throw a few over her foot there , not much a a few blades. and erase the blades of grass that are over the snake belly there. With the light a shadow from her would look great :)
Vex
19 years ago
ok, rough outline of what i see wrong, sorry for the absense of fluff :p
the snake is too smooth, like plastic, it needs texture. they are scaley !
her skin is too shiny. even if she was standing nude sweating like a pig in the jungle, she wouldn't look like miss barbie.
the grass doesn't follow PoV. it looks JUST like you took a grass brush and made a wall out of it. Look at some grass photos for reference.
there's no shadows.
nice hair.
the snake is too smooth, like plastic, it needs texture. they are scaley !
her skin is too shiny. even if she was standing nude sweating like a pig in the jungle, she wouldn't look like miss barbie.
the grass doesn't follow PoV. it looks JUST like you took a grass brush and made a wall out of it. Look at some grass photos for reference.
there's no shadows.
nice hair.
ROzbeans
19 years ago
Overall, this is a huge improvement, Shy. Seriously. She's shiny but her skin has more texture than some of your earlier posted work. :thumbsup
Other than what's been touched upon - good job on her hair. I can't stress how much of a mother fucking bitch hair can be. Very well done, always room for improvement but again :thumbsup
I'll reiterate, be very aware of your POV with the grass and shadows. What type of lights did you use? Prepackaged or custom? Did you use a unimesh/hyperreal on her skin? I've seen shiny snakes so that actually looks good to me, but texturing is ALWAYS a plus. I'm just learning the material room myself, so keep on whatever you're doing because you are improving tremendously!
=)
Other than what's been touched upon - good job on her hair. I can't stress how much of a mother fucking bitch hair can be. Very well done, always room for improvement but again :thumbsup
I'll reiterate, be very aware of your POV with the grass and shadows. What type of lights did you use? Prepackaged or custom? Did you use a unimesh/hyperreal on her skin? I've seen shiny snakes so that actually looks good to me, but texturing is ALWAYS a plus. I'm just learning the material room myself, so keep on whatever you're doing because you are improving tremendously!
=)
shiyla
19 years ago
ok originally there was a gold gloss on her skin... like she rubbed branxer all over her it was really hot but was rendering funny.. i'm still working on it /growls at shadows
Vex
19 years ago
you should pick up the pwSurface plugin for DAZ over at DAZ now. it would realllly help with the skin realism
shiyla
19 years ago
wow that looks really cool.... now to scrunge for money!
Xandare
19 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmm.... Naked reheads 4tw!
shiyla
19 years ago
redheads are my specialty
shiyla
19 years ago
ok here is the fixes i made
Vex
19 years ago
its looking way better, but you need to postwork her elbow thats all black and stuff
shiyla
19 years ago
fixed