WIP : Celeste De'Espionne C/C Pls!

OK I finally let myself work on my Cel's pic again =D I'm diggin this one I think but a couple things bug me. Her eyes for one but I'm not sure what to do. And the building behind her.. texture obviously want's so hot *sigh* Should I just blur the hell out of it for DOF effect? Anything else someone spots that's off? Hammer me peeps!

Celeste !!!

Celeste 2.0 !!!

Credits
V4 w/ morphs by me
Katie texture (postworked)
V3 freebie piercings
V4 bodysuit + gloves
V4 Domino coat
V3 Blackhearted Irina thigh holster + guns + boot knife
V4 Omega Huntress neck + boots
Koz's all back hair (postworked)
Freebie wakizashi's
Modified DM pose
PW Surface
1st background : Stonemason's Hero Building 2 freebie (rooftop area)

ROzbeans 19 years ago
Yeah the background looks way disportionate. I'd go with something else. Celeste herself /whistles - is the the v4 body suit? She is l'hot! I like her expression, outfit and good pose. :thumbsup
Temprah 19 years ago
ayup that's the bodysuit. I added the zipper but there's a cool seam there that shows you right where to go =) Went ahead and added in credits.

So... background suggestions anyone?
ROzbeans 19 years ago
Anything by stonemason would work great. You can do an 'outer rim' background from render, too.
Eve 19 years ago
She looks hawt! Great job putting that outfit together too. As for the background, I think if you moved the building back some, that alone would help a lot. Right now it's just too close right behind her or somethin.
jadephyre 19 years ago
the background needs a facelift, but Celeste is looking great :)
Temprah 19 years ago
thanks y'all =) I broke down and loaded up Urban Sprawl, found me a nice alley and rendered up a background. 10+ hours *sigh* Will drop her in tonight and y'all can tell me if it fits. *crosses fingers* =)
Adiene 19 years ago
wow she looks great hun =D Nice work on her, the outfit, pose, expression is steller ~!
Temprah 19 years ago
updated the first post with version 2... How does the new background look? Her shadow ok? I postworked it so I am never sure if they fit *sigh*

Should we call her done...?
Eve 19 years ago
Looks right to me hon ;) She's kickin' some real ass now *nod*
Adiene 19 years ago
Musch better!! :D /claps
ROzbeans 19 years ago
Very cool! If you blur the background just do it a teeny tiny bit, but it looks kick ass!