Celeste 2 WIP

her elbow needs to be in closeer to her side to give extra spunkness to the flip off lol

The hand thats resting on the hip seems at a slightly weird angle to me. Maybe twist the hand or wrist a little to fix it.

hrm... with the hand on her hip that's from a stock pose i've been modifying. I did pull the arm out a twinge since the fingers dissapeared into the skirt. =/ So angle the wrist more.. bent or less bent?

I think bent more, so it looks more natural sitting there.

updated the first post with the changed pose. This one look good?

Oh wow, I love her expression~ :) It is awesome.

LOL that is a great expression! Cute outfit too =D

does the second pose look better where I modified the hand and arm like y'all suggested? I think it's gtg for post..? Or does anyone spy anything wrong with the pose / clothes?

C/C wise I don't see anything wrong really. Didn't see any collisions, her pose looks natural although she's up on the balls of her feet like she's in heels. You might want to level her feet out, but really that's just being picky.

cool! and she's going to be standing next to Amby, no wonder she wanted to seem taller ;)

looks good to me! :D

Aw, reminds me of my family portraits...:D.

Yup gonna be a kind of casual snapshot famiy pic of her and Amby, back when they got along. Well as much as anyone can with Celeste.

heh I got carried away and turned it into a sig for her for SA..
I don't do the whole grunge goth thing very often so it was an interesting challenge.