The first thing that I noticed was that her left arm looks extremely unnatural. I don't know, she looks half relaxed and half stiff. The texture on her arm is really distracting. Maybe if she's slouched just a little more? Don't know if you're going to rerender, if not I'd soft up her bicep a little, tone down the highlight on it from the candle.
Her right arm and hand look good, so does the cigarette. I suppose it's just her posture and arm that keep distracting my eye away from the rest of the picture. Also where is the light coming from on her thigh? That doesn't make sense. I'd lay her left hand flat on the book though, not touching it with her fingertips.
Overall it's cool, but once you start to look, you really notice what I meantioned above. Or at least I did. :thumbsup
WIP : Quiet Time C/C Pls!!!
thought I should show the quieter, not so nasty and lethal side of Celeste. Really worked hard on the lighting and postwork on this, please hit me hard!
Quiet Time
credits :
V4 w/ Katie texture, morphs by me
V3 piercing pack
Everyday wear panties
AS Tank top (I think)
Koz all back hair
candles and ashtray (bowl) from some DM pack (MPnP maybe)
Ancient Book
table from King's Chamber
freebie cigarette retextured
Manor House
Japanese room
Daz|Studio
PWSurface
Photoshop 6
Eye Candy 4000
ROzbeans
19 years ago