the only thing that pops out at me posewise - is that ivy's hair needs a bit more "swing" to match the flow of the other two - it looks like theres some airflow from left to right? also - what are they supposed to be standng/kneeling on? what's-her-name, the blond, is obviously floating...
overall, i rather like the way you've set this one up! great job!
WIP Batman Villainesses CC Needed
This is still a wip but I could definately use some CC. My brain is really fried. I don't like Ivy's hair I really suck at doing hair.
Ok lets see if I can remember all the stuff I used...
V4, April's Vaine Braid, Hi-Fantasy Pussycat by Pretty 3D I think I also used his V4 char thing
Aiko Harlikins, Paradise Hair, Egypt Hair, Yamato (?) Ivy thing
lol as I said my brian is fried and I really can't remember what all I used especially for the faces since I mixed and matched. Background is one I found off the web when looking for a picture of Gotham City with the bat signal (not as easy as you would think either)
FyreGarnett
18 years ago
ROzbeans
18 years ago
Very nice posing! Definitely go with dramatic lighting and shadows with this - it'll really make it pop!
Sabby
18 years ago
Suggestions...
I made a draw over of things I see wrong. Here:
Also, on what was already mentioned... darker shadows / hair movement would rock... another paint over below, I moved her red hair, started painting over it in orange so you can see it. (it would obviously be in red to match her hair if you did it...)
I also took the whole picture and duplicated it... set the layer to overlay and gaussion blurred it at 3px... IMO it adds much needed depth to the whole scene. (Personally... I'd get a better quality batman image for the backdrop...
Hope I didn't offend by painting over your images.
I made a draw over of things I see wrong. Here:
Also, on what was already mentioned... darker shadows / hair movement would rock... another paint over below, I moved her red hair, started painting over it in orange so you can see it. (it would obviously be in red to match her hair if you did it...)
I also took the whole picture and duplicated it... set the layer to overlay and gaussion blurred it at 3px... IMO it adds much needed depth to the whole scene. (Personally... I'd get a better quality batman image for the backdrop...
Hope I didn't offend by painting over your images.
SnowDragon
18 years ago
No you didn't. Thank you all for the suggestions. The sad part about the background was that was the best one I could find that didn't have Batman or other things in the background. Yes I knew I would b\need to redo the hair. Realized after actually taking a break and seeing it posted it needed the swing in it. Lol just realized it looks like nothing to stand on for Harley. Not sure what you are saying about Ivy's leg? I really just click the skin stuff and did the pose with some lights. I love the gaussian blur but unfortunately it won't work for what I want this for. This is going to be a tat on my back. So I kinda need things clear but I also want it to look good. I just wanted something different for a tat on me. I don't like things that everyone in the world can have. I want to have something unique. So any help and suggestions on how to make this better are very much appreciated.
Keep the CC coming I will be changing a few things this weekend and post the new results for CC.
Keep the CC coming I will be changing a few things this weekend and post the new results for CC.
Adiene
18 years ago
Ivy's leg has some texture setting flaws look slike, can just go in and smudge over it at 45% till its smooths out. Harley is floating but you can grab a building and sit them on top of so it blends in with your background ... actually if you look at ivy and catwoman it looks like harley is at a different camera angle /shrug but thats all I can see looks nice I had one similar startd before my comp crashed I had worked on for like a year rofl /envy