Hi it's me
Hi it's me... again...
I've only been doing this for a little while, so... like, don't be too harsh.
I'm changing the coloring of the "was death" to make it stand out better against the background. Umm, yep, that's about it.
Thanks Mae for trying to help me out with my question earlier, I appreciate it :D
Guest
20 years ago
it looks great I think. I was gonna say that the text was sorta hard to read, sorta blurry, but it looks like the whole sig has that effect, so it looks good imo. :) I love your lil quote thing you have there, thats cool :)
Guest
20 years ago
Hi! You've got the basics of layout down and the border is neat. I notice some blurriness too both in the background image and the text. Did you use some kind of filter?
The white text also stands out more than your character's image or name - I think your character should always be your main focus. Maybe try a less bright color like a pale yellow and give it a light glow if necessary to make it stand out from the background. For the "all hell", I would use the same font as the rest, but if you want to make it stand out more just use the red color you've got going on.
I wouldn't change the color of "was death". If you want to add emphasis, pick one phrase to do that with. "All hell" was already a good choice. Also, maybe pick a different sans serif font for your quote cause this one seems to be squishing together and gets a little difficult to read.
Post more often too! ;)
The white text also stands out more than your character's image or name - I think your character should always be your main focus. Maybe try a less bright color like a pale yellow and give it a light glow if necessary to make it stand out from the background. For the "all hell", I would use the same font as the rest, but if you want to make it stand out more just use the red color you've got going on.
I wouldn't change the color of "was death". If you want to add emphasis, pick one phrase to do that with. "All hell" was already a good choice. Also, maybe pick a different sans serif font for your quote cause this one seems to be squishing together and gets a little difficult to read.
Post more often too! ;)
Gilae
20 years ago
Hiya 4A :)
I agree with Ry. Maybe increase the size of your dude to make him stand out more. Great work! :) And nice use of quotes!!
I agree with Ry. Maybe increase the size of your dude to make him stand out more. Great work! :) And nice use of quotes!!
ROzbeans
20 years ago
Wow that came out awesome! Other than what's been mentioned, I'd change the font to something a little more legible. Either its my crappy eyes or its just too hard to read. Great job, I love how your particle effects came out :thumbsup
Foramorm
20 years ago
I was kind of going with the enraged, primal effect by blurring him slightly. The text was unintentional, I think. I'll check, and maybe fix that.
Yeah, the text is my biggest beef at this point, numero uno on my to-do list. It's really competing with him at the moment.
I may do that. It might not be necessary once I tone down the text, though.
Brilliant!
Thanks! Me too, i'm liking them more and more as I look at them.
That was a typo, I had meant to say "all hell" instead of "was death".
Yeah, i'm not sure if I accidentally blurred it by mistake. I'm working on finding a new font for it.
Roger that.
As a side note, it was late when I did this, and I had already spent all day studying for finals, so...yeah. I'll try to fix some of this, and see how it turns out.
Thanks for the advice, glad you liked it :D
Ryala
I notice some blurriness too both in the background image and the text. Did you use some kind of filter?
I was kind of going with the enraged, primal effect by blurring him slightly. The text was unintentional, I think. I'll check, and maybe fix that.
Ryala
The white text also stands out more than your character's image or name
Yeah, the text is my biggest beef at this point, numero uno on my to-do list. It's really competing with him at the moment.
Gilae
I agree with Ry. Maybe increase the size of your dude to make him stand out more. Great work!
I may do that. It might not be necessary once I tone down the text, though.
Ryala
Maybe try a less bright color like a pale yellow and give it a light glow if necessary to make it stand out from the background.
Brilliant!
Maelarya
Great job, I love how your particle effects came out
Thanks! Me too, i'm liking them more and more as I look at them.
Ryala
I wouldn't change the color of "was death". If you want to add emphasis, pick one phrase to do that with. "All hell" was already a good choice.
That was a typo, I had meant to say "all hell" instead of "was death".
Ryala
Also, maybe pick a different sans serif font for your quote cause this one seems to be squishing together and gets a little difficult to read.
Yeah, i'm not sure if I accidentally blurred it by mistake. I'm working on finding a new font for it.
Ryala
Post more often too! ;)
Roger that.
As a side note, it was late when I did this, and I had already spent all day studying for finals, so...yeah. I'll try to fix some of this, and see how it turns out.
Thanks for the advice, glad you liked it :D
Foramorm
20 years ago
I've totally removed the text at the moment, but I enlarged the actual character, and fixed some other things while I was at it.
Once I decide on a decent font, i'll attempt to reintroduce the quote.
Once I decide on a decent font, i'll attempt to reintroduce the quote.
Draegloth
20 years ago
A suggestion... don't blur the character. I agree with making him bigger and more central... the sig should be about him. tone down his name, make it smaller and use a less... horrific... font.
the overall blur effect makes it kind of awkward, and I would lose it. maybe use the blur brush to blur certain aspects, but on the whole image, I wouldn't. if you want an enraged effect, try a red ambient light or something.
or don't listen to me at all.. that's fine too. =)
the overall blur effect makes it kind of awkward, and I would lose it. maybe use the blur brush to blur certain aspects, but on the whole image, I wouldn't. if you want an enraged effect, try a red ambient light or something.
or don't listen to me at all.. that's fine too. =)