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you know im gonna say slap a light around her face..

her lower half is much more lit than her head, you can hardly tell she's smirking :/

maybe try to focus her eyes on the viewer? would kind of give it a little more emotion/atmosphere.

otherwise is lookin sexy =)

I think I had a memory problem last night. I know someone mentioned it before, but after a certain point, I couldnt move anything BUT her smile. It was weird. I could move her head and eyes and in the preview she was looking more at the viewer, eyes and all but it wouldnt render that way =( I'll load it up and see if it works this time.

What Vex said. I like the idea of it though and to pose looks good. Is she leaning on the post behind her or the weapon? Its a little hard to tell but a change in the lighting might fix that.

Added a bit bright lighting, used pepper's lighting actually. I tried fixing the eyes but .... /pulls hair, I dont know. They look good in preview but not in render. Gonna fuss with something else for a little bit and then maybe go back to this when i get home.

No c/c to add. Did you set up the pose on your own? It looks good. And that outfit is teh hawt~

That's a DM boutique pose, but I fussed with the arm and hand myself.

I'm so proud of you~ /smother

LOL /hug

Looks hot... :) You could stand to whiten/lighten the white in her left eye (our white) near her nose. It looks so dark (and there is no readon for it to as thats the side with the light source) that it makes her look almost cross-eyed.

I thought it was a DM pose, but good job on the hand and arm~

Yeah I'm amazed on how big of a difference the lighting near the eyes makes. I so wish Poser was more wysiwyg. =/

Her breasts are really strange looking. They are like spherical baloons and are spaced way way too far apart. Also, her torso in general just looks too big and thick compared to her shoulders and arms.

And that's....bad?