DEs Commission - CC4.5 - WIP

verah hawt~

OMG add white eyebrows! LOL Will you be adding in any kind of background? The gradient isn't really adding much to the look of the characters. It doesn't have to be anything fancy. Hell, they could be standing up against a wall. The bg just needs something more interesting. For the lips I'd go more purple. With blue skin, you'd expect some blue tones on the lips. I'm not diggin the shades of blue, but then I never really liked the EQ DE colors so not much can be helped on that. I like the hand holding thing. I think some sparkle/shine added to the metal bits of their outfits would make the scene pop more. The addition of the epic will make things feel more finished I'm sure.

great start.

I cant tell if the background is responsible or the recoloring you did of the textures, but it seems really washed out to me.

the contrast and saturation needs to be adjusted i think.. on the outfits at least. and Ry's suggestion to shine up the metal bits would go a long way.

I stuck em on the gradiant cause I have no background as of yet, I am still in the posing stage.

Thanks for CC... Will be working on it more tomorrow

I don't have much to add on what has already been said. Yeah, adding a nice background will go a long way to getting it to the end point. I have to agree on the skin tones, they are a teensy bit dull looking. I haven't played EQ (yet!), so I have no idea what the game colors look like, but a bit of saturation could fix that. Or some material room highlighting. Anything to just make it a bit (wow, I am loving that word today) vibrant. Then again, a dark background might make them stand out more already.

Hmm, pose wise... not sure, but maybe try pressing their shoulders together a bit more? So it looks like they are leaning against each other and not just standing close together?

Love the choice of outfits, very sexy.

lessee... X said you should call this Blondage - Neriak style, or have a headline Now Appearing at the Maiden's Fancy. hehe. ahem. OKKKKKK... CC..

On the left (red outfit) Something seems a tad off in her expression.. maybe close her eyes a tad more, the wide eyes and smile seem off on her. And the fingers.. I like the concept of holding hands but I just tried that pose with my hand and ouchie! I'd bend her other fingers some more, or relax the others.. try for a look of them woven together loosely maybe? Their hands I mean. OK.. The right girl (black outfit) Her neck seems twisted too much. And there is a sheen on her skin that isn't on the other one. It makes her look oiled / sweaty. Her leg towards us seems off, it blends into her rear leg a bit.

On both of them you need to pop out the clothing details so it loses the painted on look.. Ya know, thicken the edges so they raise up from her, add some wrinkles and add to the 3d feel. And definitely shine up those metal bits, will add a lot of depth.

Still havent post worked the girls yet, gotta do hair and I tried the lighter eyebrows they freak me out. :)

Gonna shine the bits on the legs etc, just putting it into the layout to see how it works...

Thinking of doing away with Sexathang's name (ewe what a name...)