This has good composition, but the background sky doesn't give the feeling of a night with a bright moon for her to be "dancing on moonbeams". It looks like a sunset and there's no way a reflection of light on the moon could compete with the brightness of the sun. The text on the bottom also detracts from the image. I'd suggest taking it out completely or using a much smaller, simpler font and white or grey. The urban outfit on her doesn't quite fit the forest theme, but maybe that's just me. The detail on the trees is great.
This has good composition, but the background sky doesn't give the feeling of a night with a bright moon for her to be "dancing on moonbeams". It looks like a sunset and there's no way a reflection of light on the moon could compete with the brightness of the sun. The text on the bottom also detracts from the image. I'd suggest taking it out completely or using a much smaller, simpler font and white or grey. The urban outfit on her doesn't quite fit the forest theme, but maybe that's just me. The detail on the trees is great.