I know the feeling; I have similar experiences with fanfic writing. I have a few close friends that I use to "beta" my original fiction, but I think showing fanfic to anyone outside the community would just weird people out, so I go with the communities availiable for the medium.
To milk out anything helpful, I will often give a specific opening which leads to broader discussion. I make an email address availiable. I critique others the way I wish to be critiqued, and put a good deal of time into looking at other people's work and responding.
I'm amazed at how many people genuinely don't understand what c/c is. Perhaps saying in clear terms what you want would help, I don't know. At the writing sites I go to, people will often complain that anything negative in your story discussion thread is a "flame."
Rant about c/c
Anyone go to other web sites that support screenshot manips like norrath studio? Its gotten to the point to where you can't get a god damn decent critique for anything unless you're a freehand artist and even then you just get people kissing your ass. I can't get better if someone doesn't tell me what i could do better.
/snarl
Verileah
21 years ago
ROzbeans
21 years ago
I used to write fan fic. I met a girl on a newsgroup and she beta'd everything for me. God she was awesome, always caught my grammatical errors and was encouraging. She sent my daughter a little pirate t shirt when she went to the carribbean and i taped season 7 of the x files for her since it was 6 months behind in England where she lived, but was australian I think. I need to email her hehe.
I have a writing section, Veri if you ever want to post your work there. I'd LOVE to read it =)
I have a writing section, Veri if you ever want to post your work there. I'd LOVE to read it =)
Guest
21 years ago
I'm sowwy, Mae. :( I've been too tired when I get home to post anything lengthy on NS, but you know if you IM me with anything I'll pick it apart like a naggy Jewish wife.
ROzbeans
21 years ago
I know dear =) Wasn't directed towards you at all. You and Vex give me the best c/c and I should just ask you to directly instead of relying on the NS people.
Ryala
I'm sowwy, Mae. :( I've been too tired when I get home to post anything lengthy on NS, but you know if you IM me with anything I'll pick it apart like a naggy Jewish wife.
I know dear =) Wasn't directed towards you at all. You and Vex give me the best c/c and I should just ask you to directly instead of relying on the NS people.
Keero
21 years ago
send me them Mae =P I have the stupid ability to find something wrong in everything. :)
ROzbeans
21 years ago
I post everything I do here, I'll start begging for c/c in each one then =)
Keero
send me them Mae =P I have the stupid ability to find something wrong in everything. :)
I post everything I do here, I'll start begging for c/c in each one then =)
Keero
21 years ago
K, I'll start getting your back =P
Just dont hate me :(
Just dont hate me :(
ROzbeans
21 years ago
I appreciate any and all criticism, just as long as its constructive and you dont say something like, 'it sucks' then that's cool =)
Keero
21 years ago
sounds good to me.
You suck, and I am cool. muaha
You suck, and I am cool. muaha
ROzbeans
21 years ago
I'm gonna let that pass cuz yer cute. /bonk
Keero
sounds good to me.
You suck, and I am cool. muaha
I'm gonna let that pass cuz yer cute. /bonk