Zerar - final added for approval

Cool I see you lurking! =) Finishing up 1 commission and starting yours within a day or so. =)

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C/C PLEASE - you know who you are. Give it to me!!






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http://www.theangrycrayon.com/images/zerarmockup.jpg

Zerar 21 years ago
WOOT! I look forward to seeing it! :grin:
ROzbeans 21 years ago
What i was planning on doing was doing a scaled up shot of your sword and face. A nice tight shot. Let me know what you think too of the background. =)
Zerar 21 years ago
I am totally digging the face/sword thing... but as far as the background goes, it's nice, but Tetzou got a really sweet SS of Anguish the other night... was wondering if he could send it to you while I am away on vacation or something and you could use that in the background if you think that will work once you see it. :grin:
ROzbeans 21 years ago
Definitely, send it and any other screens you have of that zone. I have zip =)
Zerar 21 years ago
Actually come to think of it I'd rather have Shar Val in the background... think we can work that out? I dig how my hometown looks from the outside... all leet n' shiz. :grin:
ROzbeans 21 years ago
Zerar
Actually come to think of it I'd rather have Shar Val in the background... think we can work that out? I dig how my hometown looks from the outside... all leet n' shiz. :grin:


Yeah I can do that. I'll run over to the city and get some screenies.
Zerar 21 years ago
You OWN!
ROzbeans 21 years ago
I got some screenies tonight of shar vhal. =( Its ugly. I'll post them tomorrow so you can see though.
ROzbeans 21 years ago






This is just lightened a little, i'd touch them up more, highlight parts. But here are 3 shots of shar vhal. Honestly...there's not much there =/ The ones that have skyline, I can add sky in, do creepy clouds or whatnot. Lemme know =)
Rikr 21 years ago
Sorry for pokin my nose in this thread, what about a SS of the entrance to SV. The Lion emblems are pretty groovy. :)



Ok, Im leaving now. hehehehe
ROzbeans 21 years ago
Rikr
Sorry for pokin my nose in this thread, what about a SS of the entrance to SV. The Lion emblems are pretty groovy. :)



Ok, Im leaving now. hehehehe


Gimme watcha got!!!!!
Zerar 21 years ago
They are looking nice! Could I bother you to make me a Magelo and a neat-o avatar too? I'll donate nicely. :grin: Also, you rock! Looks really good!
ROzbeans 21 years ago


ROzbeans 21 years ago
Note to myself:

Zerar Thecatofwar
Overlord of Triton
1,000 AA's and counting!
ROzbeans 21 years ago
/bump

Final for approval up top.
Guest 21 years ago
hmmm... c/c...

OK, the shoulder piece has sharp corners - you should round the edges out so it looks less blocky. The fingers on his hand holding the sword are kinda purply and it looks funny. I think you should make the last name "TheCatofWar" and capitalize povar. I think you could enhance the details on the armor by adding some highlights to the chest piece and making the chainmail under his arm silver rather than yellow.

BTW I really like how you did the name text.
Tetzou 21 years ago
thumbs up from the roomie :lol:
Zerar 21 years ago
Ryala has some good points... I don't want the last name to be done like she said though... my name is not like that in game. I totally dig the name text though. Awesome font. I like the idea of making the underarm chainmail silver as well. so far... I am digging it though. I like the sig a lot! thanks Mae!!!!
ROzbeans 21 years ago
COOL. Thanks Ry, I'll get on that right now. I'll upload in a few =)
ROzbeans 21 years ago


Better? Also I can't highlight the armor anymore without totally making it look like a yellow blob of color =( I tried burning the shadows deep though, give it a nice contrast.