Well, considering it is a WIP, the lack of shadows is pretty noticeable which makes her pose a little off. I think so far it does look great though. The only thing that seems odd to me is her shoulders. They lack any natural contour, too curved kinda...you know how you have that natural dip in between your neck and shoulder? That's what looks like is missing.
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WIP... untitled mage
Go here: http://moonlight-lily.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=random&cat=0&pos=-1
Female's pose adapted from stock at lockstock.deviantart.com
I'm learning to draw various dragons and fantasy creatures via the help of the book Dragonart by Jessica Peffer... hence the phoenix that's hard to see in it's lines.
I'm basically still working on the overall composition of the piece, which is why it's just line art and some flat colors. CC welcome, but please be gentle.
Tools Used: Wacom Intuos 3 tablet, Photoshop CS2, Corel Painter IX... and so far the reference materials mentioned above
ROzbeans
16 years ago