Shay;74276
Several reasons???? You've mentioned a few random 'child' references...that's pitiful.
Uhm...no, I listed several, and they weren't pitiful, they were plentiful.
However, let's look at you senor...the first references are in the mafia hits...the second in your bio...
Okay...
water references = Evian water in your backpack, and raiding rooms for water
Uhm...it's a survival scenario. I'm not the only one with water.
And how many people with red hair? That's a reach and you know it. You're all about saving your cute, round fanny at this point, and I don't blame you.
vanity = amazing good looks, 'a star was born',
Uh-huh. Not vanity, bravado. False bravado is pretending to be brave. Estaban isn't anything of the sort. He's narcissitic... Big difference.
sickly sweet stench of death = can no longer bear the smell...
Smells like a load of dirty diapers to me, cause that's what death is. Rot and voided bowels.
streets = he decided to hit the streets
Streets? As in what? Not sure what you are referencing here.
rummaging = raid adjacent rooms
For food, not for personal items. Check the bio sweety.
The drugs were in conjunction with a mafia hit involving a needle. Other than that, which I still insist points to the nurse, that seems pretty lame. I don't remember overt references to drugs, though I can't say that 100% without going back and reviewing all the hits YOU perpetrated...
three days = three day shoot
Uhm...say huh? Three days of what for what?
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alse bravado = his aka personality
Bravado and false bravado are different in context. You need to consider that. Who keeps fakng being brave? The narcissitic model, or the pampered little miss homemaker who lost her husband, her friends, and the children she was supposed to be looking after? Talk about keeping a stiff upper lip. I bet you can't drink soup with that thing.
vomit ended up in her hair = hair products
Another reach. I can't see equating vomit with hair care products. That's just...out there. You been sniffing the kids model glue again?
Lincoln's terminal injury but it was a waste of time
AND
TS Elliot – The Waste Land = high school was a total waste of time
I'll give you that one, though I know it isn't for me, it does fit.
There are more references, but I will need to finish posting them when I get home.
I've posted yours before, and I'm willing to do so again, provided I saved the file. I'm pretty sure I did.
Anywho, I look forward to your next batch of vileness.
Estaban. Hated by the womens he has yet to love....