tetzou version 2 - Stick a fork in it...

ooooh me likey the pose /nod

That's one sexy lizzard.

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Need C/C please. Especially the font colors. I dont want to draw attention away from the name but the guild name is looking blah. He likes everything it says, but i need to jazz up Triton somehow.

Suggestions?

What font is that?


Can you simplify and and a texture? That might work punch it up.

As for font color, I'd say sample some of the lighter colors in the sky in your background and make it a bit of the shiny metallic. I'm not sure on a specific font, but I'd got with a smaller, simpler serif font for the server name.

For the char, I think the armor could use some touch ups. Especially that hard line on the bracer - just smudge it out. The glove could use some definition...it kinda looks like a big grey blob atm. The rest of the char looks awesome.

i LOVE the "Triton" font....don't change that please.

I think should put Tet's RL face on it since he is so hot irl. /purr

Honestly, Mae, if he is happy with it, don't change a thing I learned awhile ago that everyone thinks differently when it comes to what they like in art hehe

My opinion also is it's perfect just the way it is. I love the fonts you used and they all seem to flow very well. And the colors stand out while complimenting each other as well as the overall piece

1) is that a period in between DI and please? or am i just going crazy. can we remove if it is?

2) The arrows for "DI please", do you have any graphics? or something that wont make it look typed in? know what i mean?

Everything else is perfect though..

That's the background, not a period in between DI and Please, Tet. I can fix that though. I'll fix the hand too, that was bugging me.

I should have a brush that looks like an awesome arrowhead. I can use that instead of ~~>. Finish tonight or tomorrow morning.

Thanks for the c/c ya'll. Always appreciate it!

You rule Mae!

Well, Sunbur is right...the sig is awesome and whatever c/c you get from here is personal opinion really...but I know you've been wanting serious c/c so here's my two cents.

Something about the fonts is bugging me and I'm not sure how to fix it. (How's that for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism lol)

I think it's primarily the "Need DI Please" line. With that line as it is it introduces a new colour and a new font...neither of which is an issue except the font you chose seems to be too tall and skinny as opposed to the others which are more boxy...square instead of rectangular if that makes sense. I use TrajanPro for all of my quotes etc because it doesn't seem to argue too much with everything else, as a suggestion...and I'd just let it lay flat (no embossing etc). In a white text it will stand out enough just by being clean. I'd also move it down a smidge so it doesn't compete with the lettering for his name. And as a final preference, I'd move his last name down and to the right a smidge to group the two names together visually as seperate from the guild name etc.

I also like Ryala's idea for the colour of the text for the name. Some of those taupes in the background look funky and cool shinied up.

I hope that's not too much criticism lol. I'm clearly a text princess. ops:

By the way...gankage incoming! I really like the way you put his toon to the edge of the piece. I might use that idea for one that I'm working on!

Looks awesome, as always Mae. /sigh I hate you guys. You all make this really awesome shtuff and if I even try to figure out what "airbrush" means then I confuse myself and I ask so many questions that everyone gets ultra frustrated with me and gives up lol. Ah well. You have a wonderful talent

it's your best work yet Mae and I couldn't be more pleased. Thanks darlin.

Mae...I got my 2.0. You really need to come check it out. I think you would have a blast playin around with it. I'm not saying change my magelo/sig, but you should def. come see the particle effects....they excite me.

...sexually?

The second I logged onto aim this morning he squealed like a school girl about it. Gonna go load up on Povar tonight and check it out. I haven't seen one yet.

Grats, Tet!

yes, sexually, it's that hot. Mae would have a field day.....w/ the particle effects that is.