Kendryll - WIP

This is wonderful! I like the pose a lot, and I like how the green in the doorway works with her outfit. I like her hair, though there's something about the transition from right to left that doesn't seem quite natural... it seems like it should either transition more smoothly, or the bottom should be flipping out to the left (her right) more. Does that make sense? The only thing that really jumps out at me is it seems like there should be some shadowing around her feet. I realize the light is coming from the front, but it still seems like there should be something. Maybe some ambient occlusion? Something like that. Anyway, I really like it overall, and I can't wait to see it when you're finished with it!

I had to totally agree with the hair and nothing i did made it more natural. So i tried a few others and I really like how the dixie hair worked out. the lack of shadow on the feet bothered me too, but the final version has enough that i think it'll work!

I think she looks much better with the dixie *nodnod*

Edit: cause i apparently cant read...

Dang it I thought I posted on this =x I do like the dixie hair instead of the original, looks smoother, definitely. You have a little blotchy white stuff on her right hip, not sure what that is, but she looks great. Shadow looks decent at her feet.

nice nice , Dont have any CC For ya . Shes a cutiepatootie tho hehe

i have no idea what that white stuff is. it was not on any of the earlier renders and by the time i noticed it, i had already uploaded and submitted. which is what i get for still working on this at midnight!!

thanks guys - i think this is the best i've done over all!

Cool outfit and setting. I like the second hair style best too.

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