If one were to enter into his precence
I stopped reading his description right there. =x If you can't spell check, I don't have the time lol.
I think you did a great job with his face - he looks old but not torn up old. The piece overall does look a little dark, I don't know if you want to do subtle spotlights on their face. The female - is that Denise? That particular morph is so recognizable now - I'd change her up a little. But that's a poser freak noticing the limited amount of truly unique morphs out there =x
You could go dramatic without doing the overall dark look - doing soft spotlights can really bring attention to the characters instead of just having a dark scene.
