Actual Rikr toon WoW sig WIP.

There are a couple of things that stand out to me. You have a great deal of empty space behind him. If that's there just to fit itn the WoW logo, I'd leave it off and pull that right hand side in a bit.


I keep staring at the sparklies. The one on his belt keeps dragging the eye to the crotch. Not that it isn't a nice crotch, but I don't think you want people staring at it.

I love the crome effect on the text and the big ass hammer.

Over all great composition, just needs a little tweaking.

You just like crotches, no excuses! :p

oh, and I think it looks great, but not like I have any talent at these things :p

Well duh, but that doesn't mean Rikr wants me staring at his package.

Crap, lost my post. =( K, one more time! I like the overall sig as is to be honest. You always do a great job with your composition. The only thing i'd do is nix the sparkles and scale up the toon. I never worry about weapons being cut out since it'll focus more on the toon, more detail too. :thumbsup

:-o

Thx for the suggestions. I'll try to have a final up here shortly. :)

When enlarging the toon, the weapon does not show...well the top half of the hammer does, Should I try to relocate the hammer to say .... being used in other hand? If I do this, it will make the hammer cover up the toon a little bit. Or should I just leave the weapon off?

I acctually like the forced perspective of the hammer and I would keep it, but that's me.

It was just a suggestion, the hammer looks good as is =) I was just saying dont worry about the hammer, cut it out, shoot. Its more preference than anything.

I like the hammer. It looks...phallic ;)

This any better? Or the first one?



I gave my self sig-block. :( I don't know what to do with this now. Maybe I should start on another. :)

2nd one looks good! :thumbsup

Ok, I give up on this one for now. Maybe I'll come back and tweak it a bit. :)