New WIP... "Oh No You Don't..." looking for CC's please

It's not done...but I am SO proud of it...I have been trying so hard to learn how to operate Poser and do morphs, facial expressions and such....and this, so far is the best one I have done...
Not sure what all else I am going to put in the scene, but her expression just seemed to say "Oh no you don't....)
This is a closeup, obviously....I wanted to capture her expression.
all the facial morphs I did myself...and I spent 2 whole days on them....literally...I have been up all night...hee hee
I can't let it go when I am on to something...
base is V3
body mat is Mariny's Adela
makeup is also Mariny's Adela, mu1, lips7
Breast, hip and cloak are from Goblin Design
Hair is Mylocha's T'Pring hair
I would really really appreciate any CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms you have to offer....especially aout the facial expression and head, neck placement...I wasn't too sure about those...
OH and PS...I know the light is utterly horrific...still workin on it...not gonna mess with them til I get a whole scene done...so I know how the light should be in the first place...


Lessa 18 years ago
I think she looks pretty good, I like the light shining on her side, unsure about the white light.. it will really depend on the setting you put her in though.

I dont personally care for her ears, VAMP has some freebie ear morphs for aiko that work on v3 as well that are really nice, I use them all the time and highly recommend them *nods*
Elfykins 18 years ago
right now, everything I am working with are freebies...hubby says no purchased content til I get the hang of the program good and show him that this is not a phase....lol....I have the ears, but they don't work with what I have...have to have a morph pack or something for them to work?
Lessa 18 years ago
yeah I worked with freebies for about a month before buying anything, theres alot of really nice things available.
Elfykins 18 years ago
I wasn't happy as happy with her expression as I thought I was....after I got to looking at it, it just didn't seem all that reallistic....her eyes didn't smile...so I tweaked on it for ummm....about 3 hours (well not the whole time...) I spent some time putting a background in too....when I am finally done with it, I will do a render of the whole scene...full body

Constructive criticism appreciated, wanted and needed....still learning poser...
credits same as for the other WIP of her, except for the background, which is an Aery Soul freebie
and the earrings, which are 8chains from Janamatrix

All facial morphs done by me
all lights done by me

(she will have a campfire on the ground behind her in the finished scene...hence the orangey light from below)




Sabby 18 years ago
the elf ears.... ARE free.

http://www.vamp3d.com/store/
Elfykins 18 years ago
yes, I know...I have already downloaded them...but I can't get them to work...all the base models I have are the free versions...is that why? Someone told me that I need to get the morph packs for the base models I have, because the freebie versions don't have them included.
Sabby 18 years ago
Hmm, I didn't think they used the morph package, but I guess they do. Oh well! I tried to help~ lol
ROzbeans 18 years ago
Are you using the standard poser lights? I'd toss it up, do some different hues and drop the amber lighting. =)
Elfykins 18 years ago
the light to her left and from the ground is from a campfire...as for the other lighting...it's night or sposed to be...and I am having living hell with those...so this one has been put n the shelf for a bit so I don't end up bald
LillianaSapphire 18 years ago
i like the lighting, it matches the scene and colours,especially since you remembered to put lighting on the wall. However i'd change her expression, it seems a little too forced and overexagerated, but thats just my personal preferece.