'Come to Bed' - c/c please!
Been fussing with this one for a few days and need fresh eyes me thinks. The shirt was a massive PITA to try and get looking right, but I'd wanted to do something like this for *ages* since I first saw it. Do the wrinkles/folds etc look ok? Lighting, etc?
** Edit**
Linked first version without added shadows :
Version 1
Now here I've tried to put in some shads on the shirt and her. How do they look? Too much, too little..? I also went in and softened up her face some since it was bothering me, looked too harsh for her.
Anything else anyone sees?
V4 w/ my morphs, freebie shirt (rendo I think), Glamour hair & some instant hair, King's Chamber, Dark Moods pose (modified)
LillianaSapphire
18 years ago
i think the mood is really nice, and the lighting of the scene matches the figure really well. Her pose is natural and suggestive. Good work.
Lessa
18 years ago
She doesnt have any shadows on or under her, The shirt, her hair, her arm, should all be casting shadows someplace and without it kinda gives the shirt a 2d quality, thats my only cc though ;)
Temprah
18 years ago
Thank you Lil I'd really wanted it to be suggestive without being over the top (since that's not the kind of girl she is).
Lessa.. I know what you mean about the shadows, I think that may be what's been making me think something wasn't right but I couldn't place it. For some reason it didn't render any on the shirt.. probably because it was all incredibly flat and had lots of poke through spots before post *bleh* I'll try to go in and add some but I'm clueless as to where they would fall =S
Lessa.. I know what you mean about the shadows, I think that may be what's been making me think something wasn't right but I couldn't place it. For some reason it didn't render any on the shirt.. probably because it was all incredibly flat and had lots of poke through spots before post *bleh* I'll try to go in and add some but I'm clueless as to where they would fall =S
Lessa
18 years ago
yeah ive had pics where it takes me about half a dozen attempts to figure out why the shadows arent showing like I think they should, usually a spotlight helps with it. I am still a newb in all things 3d though hehe.
Temprah
18 years ago
Updated at the top!
Sartori
18 years ago
I like this piece a lot! She looks really good, the new shadows are a definite improvement over the first. I like the pose, and the way her finger is tracing against the door frame.
The only thing I'm not sure about is her expression. I'm not quite sure what it's trying to say. I would expect a more alluring look, but she looks a little sad for some reason, something about the eyes I think. Anyway, I think her expression could look a little more inviting.
But regardless, all in all I think it's very nice!
The only thing I'm not sure about is her expression. I'm not quite sure what it's trying to say. I would expect a more alluring look, but she looks a little sad for some reason, something about the eyes I think. Anyway, I think her expression could look a little more inviting.
But regardless, all in all I think it's very nice!
Lessa
18 years ago
I thought that too, but decided it might just be cause the eyes are yellow, Which you dont usually see in a non fantasy type image.. Shadows look much better, its looking great hun :)
ROzbeans
18 years ago
I'd maybe soften up the edges of her shirt touching the door frame - something you can do in photoshop with a real soft smudge maybe? Or even just clone over the shirt, using the wall behind her. I really like the soft shadows too of this piece - is that Amby? :teehee
Temprah
18 years ago
I'll touch that up some.. I think I know where you mean. And yeah that's Amby wearing you-know-who's shirt *wink*