Moonlight (Roz CC Please)

Doh I saw my name and thought I was in trouble lol. I'd be happy to c/c for ya =D

Starting with the overall picture - that character and makeup is absolutely beautiful - I know VAMP quality when I sees it! (hopes she's right) =D The roses and the starlight background is very ethereal and lends beautifully to the composition. :thumbsup

The Background - it looks like you stretched the background to fit the piece, so the moon itself is a little skewed. If you scaled it with photoshop, don't free scale, but SCALE then up at the menu bar, enlarge (or shrink it) by percentage. It'll keep its true form without losing its shape. It's also best to go large to small, so you don't lose resolution. Are the roses on separate layers too? The rose coming up from the bottom left looks distorted as well.

The Beauty - What kind of lights do you have on this piece? I thinks he would benefit from maybe a spot light, a soft one to her face. It would accent the beautiful curves of her face and give her proper shadows. Right now her skin looks dirty from the lighting only being on her shoulder and neck - like her face is lost in shadows. Have you tried using scripts yet like HyperReal? That's a fun little script for Poser that'll highlight the skin nicely - although I think with better lighting it can really pop her skin.

The tails of her hair flowing to the right looks a little too extreme and not natural at all - I'd bring them back a little to have them sitting on her skin, then maybe paint in some wisps to simulate the wind. A soft smudge brush over the layers of the top of her hair would help as well - at least that's what I do. I do it very very soft though with low intensity, just to take out the unnatural looking crispness.

Hope that helps =)

http://www.renderosity.com/mod/bcs/index.php?ViewProduct=60348&TopID=11219.

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Are you serious? Hi2U GANKJOB - wow.

:) lol, when I said ROz cc, I didn't know she'd get her own post for it!!! :D

I love ROz's CC it is scary but really forces you to look at things. ;) *fuggles ROz*

I think it has lots more oomph than it did lastnight just for the minor changes you made in PS. I can't wait to see more, you are growing girl!

I sandwich! Good + could be better + overall Goodness = c/c =D

Looking good :)

I think the frount tails need to be calmed down . Just because the bangs and loose bitf of the top of the hair are all peaceful it don't blend well ya know what I mean ;) Othr then that I dont have any CC I can add =X Hope it helps

PS I am glad Roz changed her baby thingie cuz the other one weired me out, i was like scared of it and shib *hides

Updated

/claps That looks much b00tifuler. Moon is back to normal and hair is spot on now. I think its nicer with the extra spray of roses missing too, abit more space to adore the elf. Did you mean to leave off the pretty earring?

very nice =D

oh the updated image is lovely!!

Beautiful :D