Digital 2D art / Wee! A new sig to critique / Aziyade 21 years ago

Wee! A new sig to critique

Let me start by saying I already know there are a few things "wrong" with this, mostly I was just experimenting. I didn't notice until I got to this point that the moon became the focal point , so I am going to shift it over to the left. And I know I need to settle on one, maybe 2 text styles.

Anyway, please tell me what you like and what you don't like.

And now, back to the drawing board...

Guest 21 years ago

You've got some good bones here. I'm more of a visual person - you mind if I just show you what direction I think you could go with it?

Aziyade 21 years ago

Knock yourself out :D I am still a complete newb at this so I would appreciate any input. ;)

Aziyade 21 years ago

Here's the next version so far...

Guest 21 years ago

This is just to show layout and stuff. The text was just thrown in so you could go with totally different fonts, I just tried to do something similar to what you had.

Guest 21 years ago

Both of those look really nice, and I think you did a great job! :)

Aziyade 21 years ago

Thanks Ryala, it looks like we were thinking along the same lines. Your's looks great!

Thanks to you too, Nalla. :)

ROzbeans 21 years ago

What Ryala said =)