Merrecks NS trade

Thanks to Eve , and CCing my pose/work along the way ;)
This is part of NS trade with the lovely Merreck. I already posted it but CC is always welcomed, I love to see where i can improve and point out whats wrong. Prolly wont change anything unless its like super tacky and Merreck suggests it hehe. Thanks~



V3/DD Glory
Razored Moffitt
Fantasy Armor/Guardian Mat
Trone of the SK
postwork in psp8

Merreck 20 years ago
I totally love it!! I'm using the magelo right now...love all the gold. :D
Adiene 20 years ago
hehe I didnt see you on =P Glad you like it! like you magelo so we can see it in action! :lol:lol:lol
Merreck 20 years ago
gear isn't as good as it should be, so don't laugh too much. :P

http://www.magelo.com/eq_view_profile.html?num=670058
ROzbeans 20 years ago
Very impressive! :thumbsup Did you do that kneeling pose from scratch? /whistles One thing that stands out to me is the shading under her buttocks :teehee It looks too uniform, like it's following the shape of her curve. Maybe a softer shadow and not so long (from curve to floor). I see the lightsource coming from by her shoulder to the right, but it just seems to harsh a shadow compared to the rest of the shadows. On the standing one, I think the sword would look more realistic if it were across the front of her legs, not behind them. I like the font for her name but I think the handwriting font you used for her guild looks too casual compared to the rest of the piece.

Overall - /whistles I like the composition and your vision with this. I think that's what I really like about your artwork, Adiene. Your sense of style and eye for trying unique poses and angles is very impressive and really sets you apart.
Vex 20 years ago
for mae's suggestion, pick the light that is casting that shadow, and in the parameter window, can change "shadow" from 1.00000 to like 0.5 or so and it'll soften the opacity of it.

cant add anymore c/c but i can compliment the fark out of it right? :thumbsup :thumbsup
Adiene 20 years ago
Aye i see what you are talking about, I'll try that out next time, thanks for the pointers!! =D
Yeah I tried the kneeling from scratch. Gave me like 5 headaches lol I did save it to my pose dict tho so now i have it for future poses hehe! Yay me for remembering :D

Here is the portrait of the kneeling one so you can actually see it better, for those that didnt sneak over to NS and see it there lol http://morbidmystic.homestead.com/trades/merreckport2.jpg

I think the light dials, other then color, are the only dials I haven't really messed around with yet ROFL! I'm still new :( haha Thanks again for the CC, pointers and compliment! Snuggles for everyone!
Vex 20 years ago
still new my ass x_x
Adiene 20 years ago
its ture I still got me training wheels on !! >(
ROzbeans 20 years ago
Did you draw the hair?
Adiene 20 years ago
eeep no its Razored Moffitt from Daz. i got it as a free DL after i became a member I think =/ Thought it looks pretty simple to draw out lol cant believe i forgot it in my credits.. i suck!

think my next daz purchace is gonna be that Ginger Hair I need more short hairs! lol
Guest 20 years ago
I can't really find anything more to c/c. This is great - I really can't tell that you're new to Poser and your style certainly shines through. I'm curious, did you paint the texture onto the armor, create a new texture for Poser, or buy it? It's fantastic.
Adiene 20 years ago
Thx Ry
As far as the armor its The Guardians texture from Rosity. Lovely textures!! That and the knights one from rDNA are the two best looking texture sets I have seen for the fantasy armor anywhere. :)
Will prolly see more of them hehe well, .. till I learn how to do my own textures.. then its on! I kinda got the hang of them already its the trans map that gives me issues now =X
Guest 20 years ago
oh...are you using DAZ Studio or Poser 5/6?
Adiene 20 years ago
Poser 5
Guest 20 years ago
okies

/runs away

/comes back and gropes Adiene

/runs away again
Adiene 20 years ago
WOOT! Thanks Ry I was starting to feel grope deprived. I am now motivated to continue on!

oh I'm inspired to render a new picture now =D
Guest 20 years ago
w00t~
Sunbur 20 years ago
Adi, this is out of this world! You truly out did yourself :)