Come on big boy....

I like what you did with the reflections off the armor. That looks really good. I also like the color and texture of the hair, and the background looks cool as well.

Things I would change:

-Judging by the title and her posture, I assume you are aiming for a "come and get me" pose. I think you did well with this, except for her hands. Her right hand seems to be twisted funny, and the left hand has her palm down. I would change it so that her palms are open and facing forward. I think that would fit the body language you are going for better. Right now it kind of looks like she is trying to keep her balance.
-I would add a slight inward curve to her right bang. The left side is perfect, but with her head tilted that way the right side doesn't look like it's falling correctly.
-I know that the chainmail texture covers the entire body by default, but in my opinion, it looks wierd covering the neck.

Her facial texture looks awesome and I agree with Jin's c/c. Really nice job on this one.

What Jin and Mae said. To add to the c/c, it looks like there's an odd curve in ther chest piece by her left breast. I'm not sure if that's inherent to the model or if it can be easily fixed, but it is noticable.

You did a nice job on the lighting on this too. Have you been working on stuff and not posting? I ask because this is a huge leap from the previous stuff that I remember. You seem to have learned and improved a lot. Keep postin ;)

nice /nodnodnod about the hands/pose :)

Take 2:

Changed armor texture
Changed expression
Modified hair a little bit
Tried something new, let me know how it turned out (the monster reflection on bp)
A little bit of different postwork

I haven't really been practicing, think it is more of not doing it than anything. Walk away from it a bit and just look at other's work and you can critique yours a little better I guess. Also it is a new version of Poser hehe.

I think the changes look good =)

Super hot...I love the reflection in the armor...excellent effect!

HAHA nice reflection! Her armor looks VERY good. I think her arms could be higher and maybe a bit of a snarl, but seriously this piece shows A LOT of improvement. You must be sneaking poser pieces elsewhere!! Post them all!! =D